All Comments on 'Weekend in Amsterdam - Early Sunday'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really looking forward to the femdom sub plot being developed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved the series so far - proof-read

As my title says, this is a great series, but in this part you seem to have slipped in quite a few mistakes, whitch seems out of character for you. Please proofread before posting.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too long a wait between chapters

Hopefully we won’t have the usual wait between these chapters. Originally this was presented as a 4 part series, but things didn’t wrap up in the 4Th story, so guessing there will be a 5th one. But hopefully it won’t be several months before it shows up. The time between chapters keeps going up!

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 3 years ago

Well that wasn’t and ending now was it.... certainly need more and quickly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That poor sap lost his wife his dignity his self esteem his identity his body hair his place in society and his masculinity in one long horrible nightmare of a weekend ! Stupid fuck shoulda left his size queen cheating slut in the red light district and went home and contacted a ruthless blood sucking attorney

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These are my first efforts at writing and I’m struggling with how to end the Amsterdam weekend. I’m a man in my 50’s (6’, still muscular/fit, greying brown hair, blue eyes) from UK who likes to exercise my imagination. Interested in reading others’ ideas and also in RP. Open m...