All Comments on 'Weekend in Amsterdam - Later Sunday'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another feminist cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So glad to see literotica supporting rapist

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I got the impression that the author didn't know or didn't care how to end this: it turned into thoroughly unlikeable characters all around. Susan was a loving wife who became a complete slut, but worse she lost any love she had for her husband. Mette needed a serious attitude adjustment and Rudi really needed a serious face adjustment. Mike was probably worst of all, he started out as an unsure husband but suddenly turned into a sissy cocksucking cuckold, I really can't understand where all the sudden charecter changes came from. What started as a decent emotional and sexual journey became, in the final part a rushed and basically ordinary cuck story, any promised drama or confrontation was given over to cheap big cock obsession. I've nothing against cuck stories but this seemed to take the easy way out.

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These are my first efforts at writing and I’m struggling with how to end the Amsterdam weekend. I’m a man in my 50’s (6’, still muscular/fit, greying brown hair, blue eyes) from UK who likes to exercise my imagination. Interested in reading others’ ideas and also in RP. Open m...