by Seattlebreeze
Seattlebreeze: you are one heck of a writer! A truly hot story, beautifully written. Looking forward to more of Dan and Kate's adventures.
Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing
I sincerely enjoyed your story and your writing style. Would love to hear more about the subsequent encounters of the three of you similar to the way you wrote about the first session. Thank you!
They certainly talked a lot before they went through with such a passionate weekend. It all built up the anticipation and sense of realism. Your style is economic and precise like the tip of your tongue stays put tickling my clit hood. The sex was hot and convincing. I was there and my moist pussy told me I needed to be there with them. Any plans for more? x
You are such a gifted writer!! I was so excited to see you had a new story and it did not disappoint. I was immediately drawn in to the story and felt as if I was there. The pace and eroticism were perfect. I must have read and re-read this story five straight times. Mesmerizing. I can't wait to see another one chronicling the "adventures" of these three. Awesome, just simply awesome.
Absolutely incredible! Your writing talent is amazing. This is beautifully written with a nice flow and perfect amount of eroticism, sensuality and detail. This felt so realistic and so easy to relate to. Thank you for this! Now I am off to enjoy more of you stories and your writing talent.
Perfectly described the tension of a married couple in love expanding their love. What a weekend to be part of. All parties are loving and giving - full ecstasy!
Loved the threesome and dynamic between the 3 of you. Especially loved the morning session with Kari riding his face! so hot!