by SiobhanSaor
A damn good read. Keep writing, I even re-read it once I finished. Well worth the read, so just keep doing what your doing.
I would love to switch places and be with a couple like that. My biggest dream. Keep writing more like this.
Thank you both for your comments. It has been a while since I have written anything and your comments help remind me why I have missed it so much.
I find it so easy to read you, written so well, so erotic and raw. I sense there is more to cum and I look forward to it. I have clicked on fav writer to make sure I do not miss anything you post. Keep it up this was an amazingly good read
Thank you for sharing this story. I was engaged from beginning to end, and I look forward to further chapters. I especially enjoy the unique perspective, as there aren't many stories like this on this site.
I do hope you'll consider carrying this story out further.....one of the best I've read here
I really enjoy your writing style. Characters are very clean and well defined.
Please continue with more chapters and hopefully week night play. I really enjoyed your writing style and the well developed characters. A touching and sexy story. Well done! Can't wait to read more from you.
SS, I admire how well you crafted this storyline with realistic characters and believable dialogue. I join the other commentators in hoping inspiration will propel sequels.
This is great. I am so horny from reading it. Please give me more.
I read 1 thru 4. How long do I have to look before I get to read 5, 6, 7, 8, etc. That was a fun read. Don't stop now.
Surely you can't leave it hang ing there. Need to understand how she enjoys her anal virginity being taken, and the other elements she talked to Cat about, groups and more. Keep going.
You have constructed a wonderful plot, and built the sexual tension artfully! Punctuation errors, and the few typos aside, your writing style made this exquisite piece of erotic fiction read very nicely. And now I'm off to luxuriate in the next installment!