All Comments on 'Weekend Plaything Wanted'

by SiobhanSaor

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markellymarkellyalmost 10 years ago
Great.

A damn good read. Keep writing, I even re-read it once I finished. Well worth the read, so just keep doing what your doing.

bwthumperbwthumperalmost 10 years ago
my dream

I would love to switch places and be with a couple like that. My biggest dream. Keep writing more like this.

SiobhanSaorSiobhanSaoralmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you both for your comments. It has been a while since I have written anything and your comments help remind me why I have missed it so much.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 10 years ago
Well Done

I find it so easy to read you, written so well, so erotic and raw. I sense there is more to cum and I look forward to it. I have clicked on fav writer to make sure I do not miss anything you post. Keep it up this was an amazingly good read

zetagirlzetagirlalmost 10 years ago
Fabulous

Already I am looking forward to the next chapter.

swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 10 years ago
An excellent read

Thank you for sharing this story. I was engaged from beginning to end, and I look forward to further chapters. I especially enjoy the unique perspective, as there aren't many stories like this on this site.

UathRichUathRichalmost 10 years ago
Weekends...and more?

I do hope you'll consider carrying this story out further.....one of the best I've read here

sandymonroesandymonroealmost 10 years ago

Nice characters! Good story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
WELL DONE!!

I really enjoy your writing style. Characters are very clean and well defined.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great job!

Please continue with more chapters and hopefully week night play. I really enjoyed your writing style and the well developed characters. A touching and sexy story. Well done! Can't wait to read more from you.

CopperflowerCopperfloweralmost 10 years ago
Wow!

Amazing, sexy story... REALLY wish to read more. ;)

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
believable erotica

SS, I admire how well you crafted this storyline with realistic characters and believable dialogue. I join the other commentators in hoping inspiration will propel sequels.

ShelleysGirlShelleysGirlabout 9 years ago
Impressed!

This is great. I am so horny from reading it. Please give me more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Short But Very Sweet

I read 1 thru 4. How long do I have to look before I get to read 5, 6, 7, 8, etc. That was a fun read. Don't stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Surely you can't leave it hang ing there. Need to understand how she enjoys her anal virginity being taken, and the other elements she talked to Cat about, groups and more. Keep going.

IslaRoyIslaRoyover 7 years ago
Intensely Erotic!

You have constructed a wonderful plot, and built the sexual tension artfully! Punctuation errors, and the few typos aside, your writing style made this exquisite piece of erotic fiction read very nicely. And now I'm off to luxuriate in the next installment!

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