All Comments on 'Weekend Visit'

Not really valid criticism, as you don't indicate what is a waste, and what part needed more creativity. You sound like the same person hitting a few of my stories from 20 years ago...Just go back to your basement.

Trashy. Nothing creative. Kinda a waste, eh?

Asswhole cucks best friend with his whore.

What a slut! She needs more cock!

5 stars.

Wow - only the second one of your stories I have read but I found it very arousing - I must read some more soon.

Nice story

I think it was a great story.

They need to continue fucking, when they have the chance. It is obvious that her husband is not taking care of her very well, and that she needs to be fucked to the point that she can start a new life...either within her tummy, or with another guy, or both!