All Comments on 'Weekend with Claire Ch. 01'

by masturbatingindc

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flgndrhollanderflgndrhollanderabout 13 years ago
Not Real

C'mon, they are just friends but they masturabte in front of each other and mention Paul, who won't mind? Get real!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
TO SHORT TO VOTE

however, it is a start. I certainly hope future chapters are somewhat longer and more meaningful.

William smythWilliam smythabout 13 years ago
Too short? Yes

But not too short to merit a 5 vote for a good first effort.

We should encourage promising young pornographers such as this one, especially when they promise a 2nd chapter after a good start.

Give the guy a hand up, not a smack down.

masturbatingindcmasturbatingindcabout 13 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks for the feedback. I understand the premise far fetched, but it's a fantasy. This is not based on a true story. Have we not all at one point been in love with a friend?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
"No Answer"...

..."Nothing", "None".

Fill in your bio, and I'll vote/comment.

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