by masturbatingindc
C'mon, they are just friends but they masturabte in front of each other and mention Paul, who won't mind? Get real!
however, it is a start. I certainly hope future chapters are somewhat longer and more meaningful.
But not too short to merit a 5 vote for a good first effort.
We should encourage promising young pornographers such as this one, especially when they promise a 2nd chapter after a good start.
Give the guy a hand up, not a smack down.
Thanks for the feedback. I understand the premise far fetched, but it's a fantasy. This is not based on a true story. Have we not all at one point been in love with a friend?
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