by masturbatingindc
..."Nothing", "None".
Fill in your bio, and I'll vote/comment.
Thanks for the feedback. I understand the premise far fetched, but it's a fantasy. This is not based on a true story. Have we not all at one point been in love with a friend?
But not too short to merit a 5 vote for a good first effort.
We should encourage promising young pornographers such as this one, especially when they promise a 2nd chapter after a good start.
Give the guy a hand up, not a smack down.
however, it is a start. I certainly hope future chapters are somewhat longer and more meaningful.
C'mon, they are just friends but they masturabte in front of each other and mention Paul, who won't mind? Get real!