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by MichaelMasters

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midgalbjmidgalbjabout 9 years ago
Nice

Enjoyed your story, very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More

Hope there is a follow story about when Chloe returns to work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Almost Great

Excellant read,but it got a little too graphic towards the end there.Would like to read

the next chapter though,really good suspence factor,too good to leave hanging.Again

good job keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great

Really enjoyed it, I disagree with earlier comments more graphic the better!

MELD9003MELD9003about 9 years ago
Well done.

Nice job, well written and most enjoyable.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
YOU KILLED IT

WTF! you had a great story going and did a complete 360? Why couldn't you at least let her keep her mask on. Not humiliate her so much at the end? Was all the graphic sexual humiliation really necessary? She could have gone back to work, heard all about it from her friends. Pretend like she was shocked at what she heard? She can't go back to work now, or ever face her friends. She may as well move away or die after what you did! You didn't just humiliate her you completely degraded her! I really enjoyed chapters 1-4 but you killed the story in chapters 5+6. There were so many possibilities for more chapters. But now all you have is a pathetic used slut who lays in the ring like a rag doll and gets used. You can name your sequel "slut blow up doll wrestles" because that's all you have left!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Don't Listen to the Earlier Commentor's

I write myself, and learned early that you can't please everyone on here. I loved this story,band agree, the more graphic the better. You are an excellent writer, better than most I've read on here, you even added some depth to the character's, which is always a welcome addition. To finish up, this is one of the best stories I've read on here. Here's hoping you continue the saga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
i loved it

This is the first and maybe last comment I've made on one of these sites i just wanted to say i loved it for the most part i didn't completely like that she got unmasked but i can see from what you put for Paul.. it seems like something could happen there in the future maybe? idk i found the wolf amazing though idk maybe its because she has black hair( have a thing for dark hair although blonds are awesome too i just find blackhair sexy) and stuff and knows her way around(feeling like she might be a lesbian correct me if im wrong lol) could definitely see some more happening between her and Chloe as well major turn on i haven't been turned on by a story this much in so long i've been thinking about it for 2 days and it still makes me cum extremely fast (like a minute to 2 minute fast to be honest :P) gotta say it was amazing and if you do more id love to see more between her and the wolf maybe them hooking up completely because of this idk(im a major fan of romance :P) hopefully you could understand all this im tired so it might not be coming out very well but all in all i loved your story and would love to see more as i said between chloe and the wolf :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good story, well written

I enjoyed the story, but I agree with an earlier poster that it would have been better if she had not been unmasked-- at least not yet. I would have liked to have seen a follow-up chapter with Chloe hearing all about the wrestling match from her friends. Then perhaps another wrestling match attended by Chloe's friends where she is unmasked-- maybe even deciding to unmask herself! In any event, I hope to see additional chapters soon! Maybe get Kirsty in the ring!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What a ride

Loved it! What a great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That reminds me

This story largly reminds me of the web site "ULTIMATE SURRENDER" where it's all female wrestling and sex and sexuale humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A sequel?

Whilst I think it would have been better if she had remained masked, I think there is a lot more that could be done with these characters - is Dianne interested in Chloe? How will Kirsty react to Chloe being the centre of attention? Will Paul be more interested in Chloe or dismissive towards her (as it's OK to watch these events but women who take part are 'disgusting sluts')? Will Chloe become more of an exhibitionist and if so, in what ways? Will Chloe get a revenge match against Lara? Will she make friends amongst the other wrestlers?

Please keep going - there a lot of ways you can move the story onward!

KitPiscesKitPiscesover 7 years ago
Incredible !!

Innocent girl stripped while wrestling,.. one of my favorite fantasies. Excellent writing, Superb image of what was going through her head. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Monday

Would love to read about Monday at work..

ReadandmoreReadandmoreover 6 years ago
Please write a sequel!

Great story. All set up for further chapters so please do write some!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice Story. Thanks

But please do a follow-up about what happens Monday morning.

maddictmaddictover 5 years ago
Tag team

Showmanship, no hard feelings, in the ring, but in the audience, and me, plenty of hard-ons.

Chloe $500 next time you win. I'll kick in another $100. Your loss however priceless

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, the unmasking was the best part!

ohnonohnonabout 1 year ago

Je la lis et la relis et j'adore toujours.

I read it and reread it and still love it.

lancelot_68lancelot_687 months ago

too. bad there is no sequel.

This story is one of the best plotted.

Cheers

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