by MichaelMasters
Excellant read,but it got a little too graphic towards the end there.Would like to read
the next chapter though,really good suspence factor,too good to leave hanging.Again
good job keep writing.
Really enjoyed it, I disagree with earlier comments more graphic the better!
Nice job, well written and most enjoyable.
Looking forward to more.
WTF! you had a great story going and did a complete 360? Why couldn't you at least let her keep her mask on. Not humiliate her so much at the end? Was all the graphic sexual humiliation really necessary? She could have gone back to work, heard all about it from her friends. Pretend like she was shocked at what she heard? She can't go back to work now, or ever face her friends. She may as well move away or die after what you did! You didn't just humiliate her you completely degraded her! I really enjoyed chapters 1-4 but you killed the story in chapters 5+6. There were so many possibilities for more chapters. But now all you have is a pathetic used slut who lays in the ring like a rag doll and gets used. You can name your sequel "slut blow up doll wrestles" because that's all you have left!
I write myself, and learned early that you can't please everyone on here. I loved this story,band agree, the more graphic the better. You are an excellent writer, better than most I've read on here, you even added some depth to the character's, which is always a welcome addition. To finish up, this is one of the best stories I've read on here. Here's hoping you continue the saga.
This is the first and maybe last comment I've made on one of these sites i just wanted to say i loved it for the most part i didn't completely like that she got unmasked but i can see from what you put for Paul.. it seems like something could happen there in the future maybe? idk i found the wolf amazing though idk maybe its because she has black hair( have a thing for dark hair although blonds are awesome too i just find blackhair sexy) and stuff and knows her way around(feeling like she might be a lesbian correct me if im wrong lol) could definitely see some more happening between her and Chloe as well major turn on i haven't been turned on by a story this much in so long i've been thinking about it for 2 days and it still makes me cum extremely fast (like a minute to 2 minute fast to be honest :P) gotta say it was amazing and if you do more id love to see more between her and the wolf maybe them hooking up completely because of this idk(im a major fan of romance :P) hopefully you could understand all this im tired so it might not be coming out very well but all in all i loved your story and would love to see more as i said between chloe and the wolf :P
I enjoyed the story, but I agree with an earlier poster that it would have been better if she had not been unmasked-- at least not yet. I would have liked to have seen a follow-up chapter with Chloe hearing all about the wrestling match from her friends. Then perhaps another wrestling match attended by Chloe's friends where she is unmasked-- maybe even deciding to unmask herself! In any event, I hope to see additional chapters soon! Maybe get Kirsty in the ring!
This story largly reminds me of the web site "ULTIMATE SURRENDER" where it's all female wrestling and sex and sexuale humiliation.
Whilst I think it would have been better if she had remained masked, I think there is a lot more that could be done with these characters - is Dianne interested in Chloe? How will Kirsty react to Chloe being the centre of attention? Will Paul be more interested in Chloe or dismissive towards her (as it's OK to watch these events but women who take part are 'disgusting sluts')? Will Chloe become more of an exhibitionist and if so, in what ways? Will Chloe get a revenge match against Lara? Will she make friends amongst the other wrestlers?
Please keep going - there a lot of ways you can move the story onward!
Innocent girl stripped while wrestling,.. one of my favorite fantasies. Excellent writing, Superb image of what was going through her head. Loved it.
Great story. All set up for further chapters so please do write some!
But please do a follow-up about what happens Monday morning.
Showmanship, no hard feelings, in the ring, but in the audience, and me, plenty of hard-ons.
Chloe $500 next time you win. I'll kick in another $100. Your loss however priceless
Je la lis et la relis et j'adore toujours.
I read it and reread it and still love it.