by evilbread341
talk about sucking...........there was none.terrible, this should never have been let on this forumn
This is fun so far! Great characters
“Are you ready to lose some weight and feel great?" Kevin’s totally a fitness nerd!
Fred’s a jerk, and Margaret seems sweet.
5 stars!
So typical that obese women are discribed as brunettes with ugly faces. Why did you not let her have long blonde hair and pretty face ? then this story would be much better.