All Comments on 'Weight Loss is Hard Work'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Horrible

Wtf

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Horrible

talk about sucking...........there was none.terrible, this should never have been let on this forumn

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
good start

Too short. Combine 2 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Story

Awesome story. I think you should continue with it! Very Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Continue the great work

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

This is fun so far! Great characters

“Are you ready to lose some weight and feel great?" Kevin’s totally a fitness nerd!

Fred’s a jerk, and Margaret seems sweet.

5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So typical that obese women are discribed as brunettes with ugly faces. Why did you not let her have long blonde hair and pretty face ? then this story would be much better.

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