All Comments on 'Weird and Wonderful Ava'

Loved it! Good job of making an improbable fantasy situation seem realistic and possible!

Beautiful....... Like life should be. The young wrestle with many things older people have already dealt with, inexperience, fear, insecurity,, ego, love versus sex. Not all of course! Acceptance, patience, compassion are things that require a heart, and granted, many people have dead hearts. I admire the Polynesian custom of young adults being eased into maturity, learning to accept differences in body and anatomy. Compassion is more important than need. Great story!

This is not porn, It is a great love story, worthy of being made into a movie.

Wonderful story!

5

Beautifully written. Well done!

I especially like how you moved the story along efficiently. The main characters were developed and realistic, the flat characters served their functions well. The story maintained a believable level of Eros without "getting too pervy."

A well written story with great developed characters along with the love making teachings I loved the way you did it way very believable. Thank you for writing it I loved it.