All Comments on 'Welcome Home, Soldier - Homecumming'

Somehow I imagine sexy Carl with a healthy dose of sexy chest hair for that manly muscular chest of his! What a real hunk of a man!

Fantastic, More please. Hot sexy story and lots of babies to come I hope.

I'm a little confused by the final interaction between Sonia and Carl. Is she telling him that she has a lover/boyfriend/husband or not? And who is saying the 'little brother' comment because the dialogue is a bit tough to parse there. I think it's Carl but again, kinda tough to follow.

Throwing in Natasha at the end was a bit of a waste to be honest, that could have been a nice hook for a sequel rather than an after-thought.

You need an editor, and maybe don't make the MC look so pathetic for so much of the story is he a big tough military guy, or a pathetic virgin pick one.

Your English could you a LOT of work... many of the sentences are simply nonsensical.

Awesome story but the ending was a little weird you should continue with it and write more of him with Natasha and mother and with her to become pregnant as well and the all stay together and rise their children and maybe add more!!!!!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"the first of many entering her" - so Cindy is destined to be a slut?? Sonia's story just made no sense. Why even include Natasha, it's complete overkill. You need and editor and a proofreader.

It has a lot of promise but needs a lot of work

Reminds me of stream-of-consciousness viewpoint. Very cerebral. Could definitely use some revising, but a very good start nonetheless

Very nice story but you ended it to soon you should have wrote more about him and Natasha and them all having his babies and all living together 5 stars

I would love another chapter.