All Comments on 'Welcome to Rolennia Ch. 01'
by DrSqueaky
- 9 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWell written and in need of additional chapters to "flesh" out the story.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoGood storyline with attention to the small details. I hope that you continue the series in this vein.... something to look forward to!
RSUPS.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIf Martin Summers doesn't want the job show me the dotted line and I'll sign my John Hancock faster than Simma can take dick-tayshun!!!
Your work here is new to me and I hope to be reading much more of it in the days and weeks ahead.
Gualterioalmost 13 years agoBut not the last! I find this story to be entertaining and well-written, with very few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, which is highly unusual here on Lit. :-)
Anonymousabout 6 years agoBoth here and in Superfucker.
How does DrSqueaky conjure it all up? And told so well after his devious mind conjures it.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoHope that you will continue this series beyond chapter 2
