by DrSqueaky
Hope that you will continue this series beyond chapter 2
Both here and in Superfucker.
How does DrSqueaky conjure it all up? And told so well after his devious mind conjures it.
Paul in Oklahoma
But not the last! I find this story to be entertaining and well-written, with very few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, which is highly unusual here on Lit. :-)
If Martin Summers doesn't want the job show me the dotted line and I'll sign my John Hancock faster than Simma can take dick-tayshun!!!
Your work here is new to me and I hope to be reading much more of it in the days and weeks ahead.
Good storyline with attention to the small details. I hope that you continue the series in this vein.... something to look forward to!
RSUPS.
Well written and in need of additional chapters to "flesh" out the story.