All Comments on 'Welcome to the Slut Asylum'

Not bad! Writing in this perspective is always a risky move, as a lot of people don’t like second person. Still, I think this is a pretty solid piece of work. I think there could have been just a few hundred or so more words to wrap up the ending. Also, I think the part with the aunt kind of happened to quickly. To ramp up the terrible horror-movie esque “this is a mistake!” feel, we could have used some lines from the aunt about how “I hope this helps her” and “its for her own good.” Anyways, great work!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Really good. New chapter??

Hoping for a chapter 2, finding out what the treatment will be? Will there be group therapy? Will Aunty come to visit? How long can she be kept on edge before her mind snaps?