All Comments on 'Welcome to the Team'

That was hot

Hot, erotic, arousing story that is well-crafted and inviting! (4th base issue, but I knew what home base Is!) Andrew reached home to be sure! Thanks!

4th baseman?

That was the best kind of welcome to the team and the beginning of an exciting new friendship. And hopefully just the beginning of this hot story.

Delighted to see you’ve got a story through. Well done. Keep at it. The dialogue is excellent, I enjoyed this story for the difference in writing approach to my own, in particular the first person perspective which works well.

Fourth base? Fourth baseman? WTF. I don't think you know much about baseball.

Mmmmmm….nicely written story. You’ve got me throbbing sitting here reading it. Andrews is one lucky fella. Makes me want to go in for a nice, deeeeep massage.