All Comments on 'Welcomed Guests Ch. 02'

Please learn the difference between too and to, as well as then and than. Almost every time you use too, you should be writing to. The same goes for Then. Flunk 6th grade English did you?

Love the story...cant wait for the next chapter.

God you guys are so picky when it comes to grammar.. Who cares if he used "to" instead of "too",...

Anyways, great start to this story.. Absolutely can NOT wait to read the next chapter.. Hoping it comes soon :)

Man! you have amazing imagination.

I'm eagerly waiting for you to post the next chapter.

Keep up the good work!

get a good editor and do a rewrite AND NEVER EVER POST A STORY WITHOUT GOING THROUGH A GOOD EDITOR FIRST.

DBRS

amazing story, can't wait to read what you come up with next

Great story, hope you continue on with it.

very good story, keep it up

And then and than. Good story, though. Keep it up.

Some confusion here between to and too.