All Comments on 'Welcoming the Neighbor Next Door'

Aside from the grammatical errors, this is a really believable and altogether stimulating story.

I read your three stories in a row. Enjoyed them, hope you write more.

I did love the idea, and it truly was a good story that could have been a great story.

I struggled to get through the second paragraph. Please find an objective someone to proofread your stories for you. I simply couldn't get past the grammar and the shifting tenses (past, present and future). Good luck, and don't stop trying.