All Comments on 'Well, So Much for Revenge'

by Defluer

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Shane279Shane279over 3 years ago
That was good

very hot and well written. Look forward to reading more of your work and hopefully more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story.

A good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
more

please continue

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

Great story. Fresh, creative and hot. 5*s

The dialogue was a little hard to read based on the formatting, but I gave you a pass due to the heat and creativity of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great writing.

Idea: MC goes to landlord and says they’ll move out quietly ASAP if they can settle on small payment and they’ll move in with MC during the COVID lockdown in exchange for sex and cooking/cleaning.

Bananaspoon13Bananaspoon13almost 3 years ago

I really like this one. This could totally have a sequel

DOC226DOC226over 2 years ago

The one thing that might have made it better is if Malory had whispered at the end that she"Wold show him how much she Wanted to Change. Her First Step in being less selfish - less about herself- was going off of birth control so that Zach could Finally experience what being a father felt like. In fact, her Mom was doing it too so that Malory would not have to go through pregnancy alone".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I guess I'm gonna read through all your stories today! All of them have been so goood so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

TOTALLY PATHETIC FROM THE SETUP IN THE BEGINNING WITH THE EX AND HER MOTHER!! JUST ANOTHER WEAK, WIMP PUSSY-WHIPPEDMAN

TheOldStudTheOldStudalmost 2 years ago

Good story...could stand a part two though...

moultonknobmoultonknobalmost 2 years ago

Load of fucking shite, wimpy bastard

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ha great story. Well done

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

How was this a loving wife story?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I retract my previous comment. Why is this in the loving wives section? It also hardly falls into invest.

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