by Defluer
very hot and well written. Look forward to reading more of your work and hopefully more to this story
Great story. Fresh, creative and hot. 5*s
The dialogue was a little hard to read based on the formatting, but I gave you a pass due to the heat and creativity of the story.
Great writing.
Idea: MC goes to landlord and says they’ll move out quietly ASAP if they can settle on small payment and they’ll move in with MC during the COVID lockdown in exchange for sex and cooking/cleaning.
The one thing that might have made it better is if Malory had whispered at the end that she"Wold show him how much she Wanted to Change. Her First Step in being less selfish - less about herself- was going off of birth control so that Zach could Finally experience what being a father felt like. In fact, her Mom was doing it too so that Malory would not have to go through pregnancy alone".
I guess I'm gonna read through all your stories today! All of them have been so goood so far.
TOTALLY PATHETIC FROM THE SETUP IN THE BEGINNING WITH THE EX AND HER MOTHER!! JUST ANOTHER WEAK, WIMP PUSSY-WHIPPEDMAN
I retract my previous comment. Why is this in the loving wives section? It also hardly falls into invest.