All Comments on 'Well, That Backfired Ch. 02'

I didn't completely see Mom coming into the picture. It wasn't bad.

The power struggle between mom and daughter could have lasted longer, but there's still time for Laurie to try to regain control, at least temporarily.

I was a little disappointed that Ellie took a backseat in this installment. I love me some fierce redhead, and am rooting for her to end up back on top, figuratively and literally. The door's open, since mom admitted she was in need of a mistress.

So fucking sucking depraved and totally fucked up and blissed out. More and more of this and soon. Depraved cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK

I not crazy about some of this, fisting and anal or mom being a who're but when Eleanor took Tom it was so hot. I'm almost afraid to read the next part, almost.

Sorry about that I meant when Sierra took Tom and the way she takes him was so hot.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

I preferred it when it was just his sister and her friend, I really enjoyed that dynamic.

You are a superlative writer with a professional grasp of the English language! Your dirty mind provides a very fertile soil in which to nurture masterpieces like this that proudly displays your masterful vocabulary in a way that contributes to, rather than distracts from the heat of the story.

OUTSTANDING!!

X-Man

Oh. My. I love your writing.