All Comments on 'Well, That Backfired Ch. 03'

More and more and soon, I want to read about all six of them getting fucked and sucked to insane levels of sexual pleasure and so fucked up that they all pass out.

Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK

That shit is So dope, well writen good background Deep characters and the most important thing Incest.

But fun. Thank goodness you didn’t indulge in your prolapsed ass fetish again.

Tom repeatedly declared his sister Laurie's breasts are bigger than her best friend, Tom's new girlfriend, Eleanor's in the last story (yeah, I know that one is hard to follow, sorry), but now in this story they're petite. Repeatedly petite. Breast reduction in the car on the way to Iowa? I can see it, maybe. Probably not though.

Other than that, the story line is still fine, and I like that everybody is getting raped. Will dad be next. No men have gotten raped yet, so that would be nice to see.

Or maybe Dad goes on a rampage and rapes everybody, Tom, Laurie, Ellie, Audie, and leaves his ex wife for last?

I await Chapter 4 with bated breath.

I appreciate all the feedback, both negative and positive.

cageysea9725, I'm fairly certain I've labeled Laurie's breast-size pretty accurately throughout the story. From the first chapter: "Laurie has a cute set of breasts, maybe b-cups, but they fill out her chest nicely and perk like they should." While I describe Ellie as being rather buxom, as well as Sierra. Audrie is somewhere between Laurie and Ellie in terms of body type. In this chapter, when describing Ellie I say, "Large, pale breasts protrude vulgarly from the cut neckline of her t-shirt, and her thick legs widen into a set of glutes that burst lasciviously from her plaid skirt." I describe Audrie as having "ample breasts" in this chapter. I don't think I mixed it up; perhaps the changing perspectives just confusing. I'll check to make sure.

This is one of the hottest stories I’ve read. Please write the next chapter.

Can't wait for the 4th installment. Publish it ASAP!!

Are Laura and Tom twins? You have in the stories several times that they are but the mother says they are conceived in two different locations? Which is it?

The original story had Tom and Laurie as a year apart, but the moderators kept rejecting it even after I aged Tom up to nineteen. The answer I got from them was: "nice try, but seniors are eighteen and juniors are seventeen." I did a rushed fix, so I must've missed some line of dialogue. I will go back and edit it. Thanks for pointing that out.

I am actually EXCITED reading the episode.

i can't wait for the next "ACTION".

Everyone fucking!

a (step) mother fuckin' cliffhanger! LOL