All Comments on 'Welldark B1 Ch. 03'

I just want to thank you all for the ratings and comments! feedback is also very welcome.

I don't know why the line breaks are longer than they should be because I was certain I fixed them this time

Keep em coming!

Great, enjoyed a well written story. I'm enjoying the pace, the slow build up..

I can’t wait to read more.

The slowish development of the story is quite enjoyable. As a person whose mind works at a pace far above the average, and as one who overthinks everything, I understand how Karitas is trying to feel his way along. One of the thoughts he keeps in his mind is, "Don't screw it up!" The emphasis is intended, and vital to observe. With the tendency to overthink, he finds himself walking in a sea of eggshells, desperately trying to avoid breaking them while at the same time trying to accelerate the process of bedding Esther. Therein in lies the major tension of the tale at the moment. Well done 👏👏.