All Comments on 'Welldark B1 Ch. 06,5'

You asked for honest feedback at the end of chapter 6, so I gave feedback of your story to that point. I said Esther was not a sympathetic character, but with Ch6,5 😉 we get in Esther's head: many of us can relate with self-doubt and jealousy. In just two pages Esther has become a sympathetic character... well done! Mea culpa for jumping the gun to criticize Esther's character development. To steal a line from Ripperfish characters, MORE! 🙂

Thanks for sharing your work. I'm really enjoying your slow burn entry into this harem school story. Too many writers eschew character development, throwing a new conquest into each chapter. This leaves me cold, as they seem more like one night stands than viable life partners. Good work!

I really enjoyed the shift in perspective for a chapter. As always your work leaves me hungry for more of your exquisitely crafted tales.

Well done❗️ We readers can now understand a bit more about both Esther and Arlethia. I'm sure curious about Esther's back story -- I'm sure FF will fill us in at appropriate points in the tale.

fun chapter!