All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 16'

I look forward to future episodes. It's very good reading.

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PN

Loved the stories and waiting for more. If you need someone to proof read , I'm 71 with time on my hands. Read all of Whitesabretooth stories also. So reading all the favorites.

I came across your writing today

Really great story told well

Looking forward to reading more

Thankyou

CRW

Thanks for the encouraging feedback. Next chapter is in the pending queue so coming soon!

I waited to start this chapter because I knew I would be on the edge of my seat. You did not disappoint, my dear. Extremely well developed and I am certainly looking forward to the next installment. Thank you!!!!!!

This is so freaking awesome!! You are one of the best storytellers on Lit. To say I loved this story is an understatement. Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!