All Comments on 'Were in the City Ch. 18'

When Jessie called Helen (5: AM, Day 4) on Helen's 'regular' phone, Helen should have assumed that that phone might be "tapped, or cloned' as she did when she used her 'other' phone by the rocks, and told jessie that she would call her back on a secure line rather than discuss what they did in her 'regular' line. Otherwise great chapter, 5 stars.

You are right, I missed that ... sigh ... too many late nights writing ... wonder if there is a way to turn that mistake into something later ... maybe not, who knows ... maybe Helen isn't perfect either? :)

Found this, binged it, enjoyed it lots. Damned be the phones. Thank you for sharing this with us, and please: keep going!