All Comments on 'Wes and Alice'

Just a set of extremely mixed up unlikeable characters, why are the main protagonists married if they have been in an open marriage for thirty years?

awful story please stop wasting peoples lives

God I thought I was stupid but this has to take the piss . Even I know that this is a interracial category story . This now has to be classed as a boring lacklustre unimaginable story. You would of stood a chance of being classed as a imaginative writer .And showed potential but that all failed when you had to. Put interracial category in your story. That then turns you into a lazy writer. If you had put your story into the interracial category I’d be praising you on a great story. But like someone has said it already the loving wife category we like our stories to natural. Yes there are billions of different ways to describe sexual activities. Without using another category in your story. We like to see how good the writers are by not using another category for help in there stories. We like to see how hard they have worked to prove they aren’t just a one time thing. So sorry for how I’ve been slaying your story but even myself can see what the major problem is with your story.

Another story where a tart attracts another tart why dont they have a Bakers Convention.

1*

You're doing us all a favour, and illustrating why no sane person would want to be part of the fucked up mess that is a poly relationship.

The LW circus has another clown writing stories, about allegedly true relationships ,that no one cares about. The clown part is continuing to post unbelievable trash time after time without change or improvement.

I was hoping this year would bring better writers and stories to this category. I was wrong. Gave this a one star rating that almost all stories int his category will receive unless we get a better class of writers here. Why do you scum authors constantly throw stories into this category that don't belong here?

Canr believe you wrote tbis crap