All Comments on 'Western Skies Ch. 03'

You paint a great Portrait of the two of them just don’t lose the light....

Thank you!!!! Every day, since Ch. 2, I've been coming here looking for Ch.3, and of course, it doesn't disappoint! I get a bad vibe from Nora, but I guess we'll see her intentions in the next part(s). Luke and Kaden are perfect for each other; however you end this series, please let them end up together and happy :-)

Bloody hell, its been a while since I have read anything so gripping, you have a real gift for bringing the characters emoting out so vividly, it almost like I am watching a movie in my minds eye. I think you should make this into a novel, call me a romantic but I would go see this movie.

Wow!

It just gets more intriguing. And hot. Really anxious now about what comes next. Already "out" to Tristan and probably Nora. And Evan? You are weaving a wonderfully suspenseful tale. Looking forward to Homecoming part 2.

Hold on tight... Don't either of you fall off! This is just to Hot to mess up before we all have a chance to see just how good it can be!

There will be problems, surprises, and challenges ahead for sure! Hopefully not to devastating. In my mind it will be worth all the secrecy and challenges ahead! Love this story! Chapter 4 soon please!

Hey for all the fans! I'm doing my best to update my bio with info on when to expect upcoming chapters, based on my current pace of writing! Thanks for all the love - D

This is real, professional-quality writing, with detailed settings, character development, excitement and angst.

Great new chapter - you’ve expanded the story with a lot of new characters and story possibilities between Tristan’s reaction, Evan’s suspicions, Nora’s teasing, and now the parents know each other.

Now you have me wondering about Kaden’s dad and the congressman and most of all I’m curious about Luke’s backstory, with these hints of vulnerability and insecurity you keep dropping.

Look forward to reading more!

Wow what a story, and you have written it so well that I cannot wait for the remainder.

this is good. not to be a critic, but one detail really bothers me — the lines about texas geography are off. nowhere around dallas has harsh winters, and the whole area's flat as hell (first chapter said something about wooded hills, which definitely isn't what you'll find around dallas)

I love the story. The characters a relatable. Can’t wait to see how things unfold.

Fantastic can't wait for the next chapter

Kiwi Fan

I’m really enjoying this story so far, I like the pacing and the development of their relationship. Please keep writing!

@anonymous on 11/21 all references to anything to do with 'cold' and 'winter' should be to Montana, not Texas...apologies if there was a typo on that but haven't found it. Also, I pictured Kaden growing up probably an hour to the east/southeast of Dallas, which most definitely has trees and gently rolling hills

So when can we expect the next installment of this lovely story

The next chapter is 90% done, I just need to edit and sort out a couple paragraphs. I was hoping to complete over the week of Thanksgiving but was too busy, so I plan to submit no later than this weekend.

It'll be worth the wait, I promise.

Really like these characters

pleeaaaaase tell me we get a new chapter soon!!

@Zorse_D, thanks for confirming! I log on everyday just to see if Ch. 4 is posted...

This is a well crafted, believable story. I can't wait to read the next episode.

Hi I’m loving your stories. You wrote well and your emotions flow beautifully through. I love reading and watching stories of men loving each other or lusting for each other as I find it beautiful, same sex pleasuring each other. Really love it. Thank you! X

Such a Joy to read your storries.

Evan sounds really friendly and I think he'd be someone Kaden could trust telling him about his relationship with Luke. I wouldn't be surprised if he doesn't already suspect it.

It’s getting hot !!!!!

Great writing! ☀️☀️

DAMN, I love this story — THANK YOU!