by LadyOfAvalon
The rating would have been much higher except you to put in the spanking. It was great until then.
If you like spanking, you like it. If you dont, you dont. Dont be discouraged by downraters;)
Quite nice, Loved the way you managed the story, it is easy to take erotic literature and make it hot from begining to end, but I was quite caught up in it from beginning to end A+!