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by TheRedChamber

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BazzleBazzle2 months ago

Ooh, such a great start! 😀

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

PLEASE continue this! Absolutely loving it so far!!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun2 months ago

Intriguing. I'd love to read the rest.

Agent0069Agent00692 months ago

The technology he used and the end goal he aimed for reminded me that one Spider-Man comic:

“You could cure cancer in people with this tech!”

“But I don’t want to cure cancer! I want to -turn people into dinosaurs- make pretty girls wet themselves!”

Other than that (and it’s a joke, not an issue), a well written story!

TheRedChamberTheRedChamber2 months agoAuthor

I was very flattered that another Literotica Author Bazzle has written his own version of this story, taking out the mind control elements and making Tamara the tease. If this sounds appealing, you can find the story here:

https://literotica.com/s/wet-tamara

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