All Comments on 'Wet and Wild'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Using gets you one star - stopped reading as coke came up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This writer needs a poes klap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Was this supposed to create arousal of some kind?

Robinius1Robinius1almost 2 years ago

Pretty good. Hard to tell what was going on in places. I didn't care for the 'F' words between brother and sister. I'm 73 years old and never spoke that way to either of my sisters. Maybe I'm out of touch but I think it's unnecessary and indicative of a lack of class. Thank you, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yawn.

ManoBlueManoBluealmost 2 years ago

What trash character. Coke head loser

flyrondflyrondalmost 2 years ago

I liked the coke angle of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

SUCH TRASH WRITING

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