Wet Encounters Ch. 01

Sorry this is a bit of a school boy’s read,

Stilted contrived dialogue and supposedly spontaneous sexual interaction: "I'm here to save you." "Great. Wanna fuck?"

A very good plot idea, very poorly developed and executed. Give it more thought and time then try again.

Hey, its an emergency. You have to do what you have to do.

If you going to be trapped by a flood, might as well be entertained. Not much else to take away from the story.

Thanks for your input, Overthefalls. Maybe you missed the bit that says that this is chapter one.

There is an opening blurb that tells readers that this is a multi-chaptered, novel-length story, the content of which is better suited to the Loving Wives category than it is to the more generic, Novels & Novellas. Unfortunately, that blurb disappeared along the way. That was my own fault, by-the-way, and not that of the moderator.

Being a novel length story, though, it is presented in a different way than would be the case for the 'wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am' flash stories you are obviously used to reading.

I do thank you for the courage you have shown in offering your comments under your own name, rather than anonymously, however. Most critics on this site don't have the balls to do so.

I'm sorry you don't like the story as it is presented, Willy, old son. Please be sure to avoid reading the next sixteen chapters. They might be a bit too long and too involved for your short attention span.