All Comments on 'Whack'

As usual, cleareyedguy delivers the goods. He writes extremely well, is funny, and ensures that there are surprising comeuppances for the main guy character.

In this one, I loved the detail that he’s one month older than his twin sister. He’s the division 1 linebacker, and she’s the skinny Vietnamese virgin. I like the whacks, and his eventual acceptance of the punishment. I like the Christian weirdness. I like the fact that he still likes the girls, and that he eventually gets laid. Or at least gets off.

I guess it’d be easier if he used his jock strength to rip himself free and then fuck all the orifices, but I like the limits. But, then again, I wouldn’t find it to be torture if a couple of virginal school girls tied me down and whacked me off for a while.

Keep it up!