All Comments on 'What a Dad Wants Ch. 02'

I forced myself to edge that's entire story. I'm sad part 2 isn't here to finish. Can't wait. Really good work...

Ok, this series is so hot so far, my cock wants to burst but holding back for more.

Love, you make me so wet. My father can take me anytime and any way he wants.

Your actual writing skills is nothing short of superb. I'm reading through this (unfinished) series a second time and wow, you're talented. Thank you.

Very, very nice. Gabby is a good girl, a daddy's girl.

Well written Girl.

Exciting!

Daddy’s little girl is a beauty.

Time to “reel” her in.

Can’t wait to see what happens tonight!

Best fucking series on this site.

This story sets itself apart from others in its genre by leaps and bounds. The author crafts a plot line that is not only exceptionally well written but believable. The storytelling, relying on the taboo, the erotic and the relationship, is similar to Alexa Riley and Penelope Douglas. Both authors are talented. This could easily be published, banned but published, similar to K Webster’s Hale and The Wild. Though, again, girlwithagift, posses talent to build a story, not the shock and awe troupe BS that are churned out in the hundreds that somehow get published despite there being a massive lack in storytelling talent.

Color me very pleasantly surprised. Shocked more like. I love a daddy complex but have never ventured into reading something that is the ‘literal’ relationship unfolding. Normally this type of story is so eye rolling and badly written it feels like an absolute waste of your time, but this didn’t. The author possesses true talent.

I’d love to read the whole book she is building into. I’d also love for Andy and Gabrielle to run off into the sunset. As long as the story doesn’t devolve into some gross family orgy, in which case it loses its appeal, and the separating talent it had. As well as its ability to get to a sub-mainstream book market.

Seeing it has been a year since she last posted I sadly think the writer is done and over with this specific foray. I appreciate her caliber of writing. This story was poles away in being well crafted and evolved compared to her quickies. She really brought something tangible to a reader.

I’d swear this is a published romance author. Absolutely would wager my kindle holds her mainstream books given how talented the entire thing is.

Please come back, or get with K Websters banned book publisher to bring it to your readers as a fully flushed romance book.

Also, any star ratings to this 8-part series, if you are not logged into the site and try and rate unanimously, the star rating disappears. This author has guaranteed WAY more views and high ratings that disappeared just like mine did repeatedly, giving her an unfair and massively inaccurate score.

What’s phenomenal about the 8 chapters of this is that Andy and Gabrielle’s relationship revolves around true and deep running love. There’s actual meat to the plot and to those two characters. It’s not a story thats basis is fluids flying everywhere. It’s really really well written! Unlike anything on this site or in this genre available to read anywhere.

More please girlwithagift

Dang this author is talented

More more more

As the authors name says- girl with a gift- is right! Unfortunately she doesn’t appear to be finishing this.

Alexa Riley? I agree with another reviewer that this author has gotta be published. Too talented

I agree with another reader that this would be an amazing fully flushed story. I’d love to see how the author builds it up to this point and where she takes it after chapter 8 ends.

Covid authors who stop something incredible….sigh

Great second chapter!

Makes sense 121k have read this. Write more!!!

I’d buy this book!

WOW!!!!!!

So thankful this hasn’t spiraled into a gang bang!

this needs to be porn

Fingers crossed this is just the dad and daughter and the plot doesn’t get royally screwed by including the mom and brother.

Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Oh Daddy, your little girl is so horny for your big breeding cock, I want to be your pregnant slutty daughter. You make me soak my bed and cum so hard.

Seeing each other the night before flicked a switch in their brains...