All Comments on 'What a Fool'

Uhm.

Only one word came across my mind to describe Tom.

WIMP.

If I was Tom, I would not shake the hand of the pussy hound.

I would not be civil with him but I'm not going to be violent if he behaves.

But again expletives would spout from my mouth. Civilly of course.

Well, at least he dumped the cheating wife.

But I think the cheater will have a better life than him.

She has a job. And she's having sex...with Devon and maybe more men.

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Like I commented on Rhein1 other stories, this author is a good writer.

Too bad his endings just sucks.

FTDS!

why leave anything? If she divorces because of abandonment she can probably get even more! Right at the start of the talk just get the lawyer working and try for a 50/50 split.

Asshole author.

Bill

All these authors stories take you to the edge of the cliff, but never let you experience the fall

Finish the story!!!

Ending!

What a total waste of your time and your supposed readers time. Just whip out the words with any thought that there is a beginning, a middle, and an actual ENDING????

I am sure you are impressed with your own limited writing ability.

Obviously your editor, assuming you even have one, has it he same limited ability to envision a complete story with an ending.

Sadly the story was starting to develop into an almost worthwhile complete story.

Damm the story is too short, I was waiting to see her return.

For the folks who attack the author. Write and submit your story. After doing that, you may post mindless critique

I felt this story was unfinished. I would like it to continue when Karla returns the next morning/afternoon. Will she go search for him and beg forgiveness? Will he move away and find another true love. Will she become the 5th wife even though she is divorced?

Nice story, is there anymore, like her returning and the pain she feels when she doesn't find her husband

Unfinished

3 stars - standard crap spouted by deranged skanky, sluts trying to justify cheating - pure and simple.

Also the consequences are pure and simple - DIVORCE

A pitty, unfinished and no logic. Why have her kiss you after she kissed him? when you already decided your mariage is dead? And why let the ass in your house! Have the talk outside make clear what you think and close the door.

Wow... don't know how to take this story, especially the ending. MC took it on his knees, timid. As the old saying goes, "It's better to die on your feet than live on your knees!" Good writing, with great emphasis on the subtleties and nuances. Very well-written.... just hard to take. He will have the last laugh. Someday. 5/5.

The new title should be: what a stupid bitch!

Good story until he did something ridiculous. Not get his HALF of the assets and not get any revenge on Devon. That lessened the story.

Again no wrap up ending. Why the hell did you stop writing?

From a 5 to a one star, Try finishing a story once.

Bill S.

Hey Bill S. What’s unfinished about the story? They’re getting divorced end of story. If you’re one of those damaged souls that feels an unmanageable anger over a work of fiction because you couldn’t jerk yourself off to a violent ending, get some therapy!

Why does she get the money?

Always the husband leaves everything to the cheating wife. Not in this world!

The wife cheats and the husband gets nothing!. If they had Kids that would happen But without kids it would be a Almost even Split!.. Why give the bitch all of it??!? What happened next?? Wheres Chapter 2???

Fuck…Rhein seems to be the wimpiest male ever born on earth!! How on earth has he survived so long without dieing of cuckold ness??he seems so mentally fucked up…! Are we sure this is not some pSychiatric asylum inmate writing his rambling’s???

I like this one better than your others where the husband tried to stay with the cheating wife. It would have paid off better to hear her reaction to his responsive action.

Pathetic trash. Probably written by a woman. Anyone has screwed up as this main character is could not be considered a man. A complete waste.

Nope, pathetic main character makes the whole thing a waste. Not really a man. This must have been written by a woman.

"I need to feel that I am wanted by someone other than my husband." -Congratulations, you're now wanted by another man, that doesn't mean that you have to fuck him!

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"you will never know the difference except that I will show you in a much more physical way how much I truly love you too." - In other words, she's been holding back on showing him how much she loves him!

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MAYBE she'll only fuck Devon this once to thank him for lining up the job, but anyone who thinks that her job as Devon's friend's "personal assistant" won't involve fucking is a fool!

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"I'm sorry Tom, this is never what I intended." - If he was really sorry. he would walk away and tell Karla to be faithful to her husband.

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"most of the savings are yours now too" - Why? If he's giving her his share of the house, HE should get most of the savings to compensate.

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Lost a star for no ending. Him leaving the ring and a note isn't an ending. What happens when she comes home? Are her parents alive? What will they say?

Weird shit.

recitation of details without any closure.

The MC is pathetic for letting it get this far. Should have at least kicked her out of work ass out the day she told him she had been on a cheaters website.

Four. If the writer had carried it on to a conclusion we would have a five.

He should have taken the money, slapped her then beat the shit out of him

Far too civilized and reasonable with the marriage wrecking SOB. Instead of reading the wife the riot act initially, he quietly does what he needs to in order to walk away. That strategy I get but only in part. She assumed by his silence that she had his reluctant approval. She needed to know that was a fallacy. Devon should have walked out the second he knew what the real lay of the land was. Ending felt weak.

I think i commented before. I agree the marriage was done as soon as she asked to sleep around. However, let the courts decide who gets what. Give nothing away.

Everything was great until the MC says you can have the house in full and most of the money that ruined a good story that turned the story into a joke, no one and I mean no one would give their partner anymore than they legally had too after a betrayal like she did⭐️⭐️

Need the aftermath when the spanking sees he left her

Ok story but still written like somebody from New England wrote it. Yes, he walked away but that’s all he did. You need to put on a pair of jeans and boots and learn to kick ass. MtM

Why would he give the house and most of their savings???? That turned this story from a 5 star to 1 star.

It's hard to understand the mentality of any writer who'd want to create such a weak main character and such a lame story. A broken ring and a highly paid off divorce is her penalty for the selfishness and evilness in her heart? Just incredibly stupid. You do your readers a great disservice by throwing this garbage out there and encouraging the female dogs to run around loose and think there won't be any consequences. You obviously have an agenda here, which means the heart and mind that wrote this is maybe just as twisted up as the product. You need to get some help. But more importantly, you need to not write trash that will destroy other people's lives by its influence. By writing this, you're doing exactly the same thing as the scumbag predator in your story. By not including any accountability or penalties upon him or the selfish excuse for a wife, you're just as bad as he is. Pathetic.

Wow, was that bad, or what? Lame story, worse with the lack of spine and the author making the scumbag predator out to be an innocent party - with no punishment out of it all? Seriously bent author ...

So passive aggressive. He knew it was over long before that night, so why not just say "Well, this isn't working for me anymore babe. I've packed my bags, have a nice life." This leaving with a sappy note and some sort of symbolism with the ring is just so... I guess you were shooting for dramatic, but it didn't have any oomph to it. When you take the lack of presence of Tom and combine it with the brevity of the story, I'm just kind of left wondering who he was even? Heck, even the professional wife fucker had more personality.

Thanks, but NO thanks. No balls couldn't even confront her with pending consequences, BEFORE the deed went down. No balls author couldn't even give an epilog...... NO score at from me!

Good but left us readers wanting a conclusion or epilogue