All Comments on 'What a Shortstop Does Ch. 11-14'

This story is fantastic. I love how Sarah is finding out what she likes....what 20 year old doesn’t like hickies (it is awesome). Your writing style is so easy to read and so enjoyable!

Great third part! The longer this goes, the more you impress me with your attention to detail and your way of writing interesting and believable characters. Thank you for sharing this with us, and cannot wait for the next chapters!

There are a lot of college girl stories out there but this one feels somehow different and I'm not really sure why. Nothing unusual happens but it's really enjoyable light reading, so I guess it must be the writers talent shining through. I particularly enjoy the dialog and banter. Really hope we are good for a few chapters more.

Another enjoyable chapter Kate. Looking forward to more. Is Sarah going to come out to her parents?

I love this chapter! This was so well written,so hot! Thank you for sharing with us. I am looking forward to the next chapter, please post soon.

You still have me very interested in the journey of Sarah and Ro. It’s all sexy in a very wholesome way. 5 stars, once again.

I’m REALLY enjoying this story. The characters are dear and the sibling and roommates teasing seem spot on. I look forward to more!

When my fave authors fail to put out for me , I check out new stories. Always on the hunt for more! Some are forgettable, or simply not my cup of tea, but now and then I get lucky. Definitely got lucky with you! Seriously, I’m truly enjoying this story. I wish, when I was in college, that I’d met a Ro or Sarah. Very likable characters, nicely paced action, realistic situations... I am glad you made it clear they didn’t have sex in the top bunk. If if ever tried that I’m pretty sure one of us would’ve done a header! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Loving It!!

I continue being simply amazed by your exquisite writing skills, with this being only your 4th posting on the Literotica site. I am just so into this story with Sar / Ro, as well as their very nice special friends. Please continue writing more chapters on this "beautiful lesbian love story🎉"; also, I would definitely read with joy, all other lesbian love adventures posted, as your repertoire expands!!

Chapters 11-14 Are Another Magnificent 5*-Star Performance!!!

Another excellent story. You writing is incredible. More please!

This is so well written, and such a great "first relationship" romance. If it goes the way first relationships generally go, the ending will be bittersweet, but the story is captivating. Another five stars to ye.

Another great chapter with lots of feelings being demonstrated by all characters so far. Hope it works out for them both.

Very hot. Totally worth the wait.