All Comments on 'What Are Friends For?'

...because it seems so real. No monster cocks, no shaved porn-star pussies, no perfect bodies, no devious plans, just very real imperfect people, old friends, who lose their inhibitions one night through alcohol and go way beyond their usual behaviour. Huge turn-on for this reader!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

I hate to write anything negative but your grammar needs to improve.

Super hot. Loved the lead in.

Thank you guys so much!

In my erotic writing I want my characters to be physically and emotionally realistic.

"I want my characters to be physically and emotionally realistic"

Well you certainly accomplished that. I empathized with everything that happened (except the alcohol overdose). I found myself wanting to jam my face and tongue into one or the other of those massive asses, and loved the little touch you added to have the one get wet when she drank.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.com