All Comments on 'What Can I Do to Make You Love Me?'

Nothing is ever gained by not taking a chance.

Boyd

It is, indeed, a lovely little story. Short, yes. Not particularly erotic (only relevant because of the venue). But a very nice piece of fiction, which happens to show why COMMUNICATION is important in any relationship.

Write on!

-- KVK

i read this story with myself in mind. although it didn't start out that way .. but i got her in the end. and still have her today.. 31 years later.. thank you for reminding me.

Love the song and love the story. Thank you. Story and song fit hand in glove.

I know how you feel! I was in a similar situation but it did not turn out so well for me. Can't win 'em all I guess.

My fourth reading of a story by this author and at last it is one that comes within the range of her experience. A story I can believe in told with great tenderness, and as always the writer's style is excellent, clear, simple, grammatical. Well done!