by AndromedaDreamer
You packed quite a bit into this little story and I really enjoyed it. It was sweet yet fucking hot as hell. I’d love to see where life takes these ladies. Thanks for sharing!
Do they or don't they stay a couple or just l.u.g. it then move on to the man responsible for knocking them up.
Fast moving and sexy!
Try to get names correct, penelope became patricia, P became J. Read it through carefully before submitting
I gave you a 5,.... just
Thank you for writing
Thank you for the comments and positive feedback everyone. It seems the initials thing really didn't work, so I've been working to fix that! :)
I've edited a version with the names in it and will be submitting as an edit shortly. So keep an eye out if you see this comment before the changes have been made.
I'm glad so many people have had a positive reaction to main characters and am definitely thinking of ideas for a follow-up, so stay tuned!
LOVED the opening scene...frosh face-to face w/real live first-ever pussy-though WHAT a disappointment she's smooth bald, esp as she's a redhead
Sweet Veronica rescued her from Jessica...she's a wreck
"She had read somewhere that a lot of women liked to watch lesbian porn, probably because it was more delicate, more sensual than watching some guy with a big dick throw his meat into some blonde bimbo's rejuvenated pussy"
Yes because Pornhub was accused of some pretty serious stuff - yet their analytics are reliable. Here's looking at you kid ;)
As older Computer Science majors will remember, P and V are the two operations of a semaphore (which was first written about sixty years ago by a Dutch computer scientist, so they were supposed to be the initials of two Dutch words).
Did AndromedaDreamer call the two lovers P and V as an "Easter egg"... a detail with a hidden meaning... or is it just a coincidence?
Oh, just lovely.
Penelope doesn’t learn what college is for; she learn what *sex* is for. Veronica is the perfect teacher; delicate, sensual, sensitive, patient. The moments of consent were especially lovely.
I didn’t mind the use of P and J in the early part of the story; it betrayed the disrespect Jessica has for Penelope and sex in general. I did find the one time Penelope refers to V during sex a little jarring but not enough to distract from the rest of the story.
Thanks to LastStandingDame, a new follower of my stories who led me here through her favorites list.