All Comments on 'What Goes Around Comes Around Pt. 05'

Very enjoyable piece of fantasy. Stay safe and keep writing! Always look forward to your posts.

Oh 5 stars, Big Guy.

Enjoy!!!

It really was great, all the way through. You're always someone I look forward to seeing new submissions from. One of these days, I will put in a submission of my own, so your comment about how long it took to show up sometimes was appreciated. Keep it up.

Loved it!

I was not sure if I would like your story ( it's not a subject matter I usually go for). But it was great. I waited till I read the whole thing before commenting. I found it well put together , the flow was good and I couldn't stop till I finished the entire thing . Thank you.

Came across this from another story and, while not my preference in subject matters I read it through as became intrigued. Enjoyable and well crafted.

Saved my comments till I'd read the entire series and as per usual it was great. Your stories are well crafted with just enough build up to keep a person interested. You are the master of your craft and I'm always looking forward to seeing a new entry from you.

Stay safe and keep writing great stories and series.

Your stories have unbelievable contents.

Great writing, Loved the story! Would love to read more about these 5 families. Thank you for sharing.

I have to post this as anonymous as I am having trouble with my password also. Once I recover it I will post comments on all your stories. I read them all over the past week. I am an avid reader and can finish a normal paperback in a couple of days. Everything you wrote is great in my opinion. As I grade a few shithead's who think they are writers I would say mine is worth more then my asshole. I am glad your health scare is working out, my mom just had a quad bypass it woke all of us up. Please don't judge my writing off this cell phone post. I detest this, bit I wanted to get it down before I forgot. Can't wait to read the next parts on some of your other stories you are writing.. Keep up the great work man. If you need any proofing help on the future let me know.

lol bro I might say too much of a good thing. I mean after 2nd chapter its just repeat. everything considering good smut but not erotica. cheers

A fantastic trip through teenage Fantasyland. This series is a great read. Thank you.

FanFuckingTastic!!!

A story with a conclusion. Damn near a unicorn. Great story and a mighty fine blueprint.

Would have loved to have seen the roles reversed. Where the boys are tied, and the ladies keep them over the weekend for their pleasure.

Just one question: Why the title? "What goes around comes around" means that people that do good things have good things happen to them, and those that do bad things have bad things happen to them. That doesn't apply to this series at all.

Great story/series! As much as the families did things afterwards, I’m surprised more didn't end up pregnant or even wanting to become pregnant. Trish or Carrie and Marty should have ended up together!

Well, even though this was a non-consentual (sic) story, as usual your stories have heart and that touch of romance. I love your writing, it's always addicting and I have to complete a series before I stop for the evening. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

There was a great deal of sex, but it never got real hot for me.

Bill S.

A month later & I enjoyed it tremendously. I must have been asleep last month when I read this because it earned 5 stars from me this time. I can’t believe that a month later & I was the last commenter. This deserves much more traffic!

Bill S.

A good series. But, the title was a bit of red herring. Also it would have been better, if atleast one of the family had different reaction than turning into nymphomaniacs and fuckung their son/brother.