All Comments on 'What Happened Ch. 03'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 13 years ago
Good story

She has really turned into a cum loving slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Like i said . John the dumb ass . Next you should have John tied up and getting it right along with his cum slut cheating wife. Wait . He doesn't need to be tied up . From the way you have his character he will do it by him self. He has already sucked the cum from his wife's mouth .

mexbearlllmexbearlllabout 13 years ago
GREAT STORY

KEEP IT GOING NO WHAT SOMEONE SAYS ABOUT YOUR WRITING!!!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago

Didn't like this as much as the previous chapter as Jack was pretty much a total douche bag.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a4 months ago

Characters are suppose to reflect human nature. There is way too much trust floating around. Based on the "assignment", there is no place for love.

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My first story was the confession of a Combat Friend. Then I wrote stories others told me. Then I just wrote to pass the time. Been away for a while, doing life stuff as an old man. 2-27-24: I'm just passing time and writing due to events in the lives of people I know.

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