All Comments on 'What Happens in Maui... Ch. 02'

Chapters need to be longer, or more frequent. Very hot!

Wow……..what a fun story! Very erotic descriptions!

Your plot for this story is very realistic which allows the reader to more readily identify with the story. For me, it is very reminiscent of some of my own experiences and it was great to relive some of them through your story. Thanks.

Enjoy the way husband and wife communicate, very natural, good writing except for a few typos; well done and await the third installment!

Very erotic and a thrill to read! It reminded me of times showing my wife to others. It would be fun to share if you want to email me at florida_beaches@aol.com