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And thanks.

An excellent story for sure, with great usage of grammar, punctuation and spelling. You did a nice job of developing the characters, and provided a unique plot twist to a familiar tale. The sexual descriptions were extremely erotic, and well written. This story deserves a 5 star plus rating! Keep up the good work, and keep 'em--and us--coming.

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5 stars for a well done adventure. lots of possibilities here. i'm waiting patiently.(toe tapping)