All Comments on 'What happens in Vegas Ch. 01'

Really enjoyed it. One minor detail. It is Caeser's Palace.

Am a scotch whisky fan but on occasions have enjoyed a Jack Daniels though i would not insult the maker of that nectar and drown it in coke, pak! gut rot. Oh, nice story please continue..

Sorry to mention in what was otherwise a good story that some of the spelling and grammar errors were distracting to me. You may need to use an editor or carefully re-read your story before posting. Still good though with potential for lots of other storylines.

Noted and thank you for the supportive comment! I’ll definitely be sure to proof read better.

Need to continue this story