by Optimus9812
Noted and thank you for the supportive comment! I’ll definitely be sure to proof read better.
Sorry to mention in what was otherwise a good story that some of the spelling and grammar errors were distracting to me. You may need to use an editor or carefully re-read your story before posting. Still good though with potential for lots of other storylines.
Am a scotch whisky fan but on occasions have enjoyed a Jack Daniels though i would not insult the maker of that nectar and drown it in coke, pak! gut rot. Oh, nice story please continue..