All Comments on 'What I Think of You Pt. 07'

Love this story. Still think Yoshiko might need to temper the alternative reality Alex made by accident before they get caught. As to updating her wardrobe, given her goals and her figure, ditching bras altogether is a great move. Look forward to more

There's definitely a flaw in Yoshiko's plan, one that I don't think she's even considered: Now that Asha's clique is basically a bunch of guys who couldn't care less about her and treat her like an easily manipulated set of holes, the contrast between them and Alex is gonna be so great that she'll probably develop a crush on him too, therefore creating another competitor for his affections...

Very much enjoying this story! Currently the one I look forward to the most. I feel a bit like Yoshiko though in that I’d prefer the changes to reality to be more present and visible to her and Alex. Interested to see Alex figure out his ability and have some more control over what he really wants, rather than just going with Yoshiko’s ideas. Perhaps once he gets an idea of it, or even if he just fantasizes about other things, there could be changes Yoshiko isn’t initially aware of and something knocks her off her rhythm, she seems too in control here imo.

Looking forward to more!

Keep this up loving the story building

More please ASAP, I love when I get to read self degrading dirty talk

I. NEED. MORE!

Wow, what a story. Rock hard throughout and constantly on the edge!

sorry Im out. The story is getting both more and more deprived, sadistic and boring in equal measures. Its your story but The only thing that would make this recoverable is if Yoshiko would fall by her own Pitard. I still have the same problem. You keep going and completely blow off previous Characters. How can women completely devoted to someone just fade into the background and never be heard from again? Yoshi is irredemable and deserves to be turned and made into the helpless whore she wants to make all other women into. The story isnt even sexy any more. Its the same over and over. No creative moments. All Tell and no show. Breaking the first rule of all creative writing.