All Comments on 'What It Leads To'

I enjoyed this! It is well written, vivid, and very erotic! Great job!

This is a very well written story. It has a decent plot and reflects modern reality. This is a good read!

Very well written and erotic story. Organization, imagination, and conciseness were the three keys to my labeling this the story of the week. Look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for the outstanding contribution.

Very nice. Please keep writing. However, the narrator can hardly be aware of what he does subconsiously (as he seems to in the first paragraph). But good sexy stuff!

" . . . feel the moan that escapes her throat and echoes into my mouth." Very vivid and sexy imagry. Nicely done!