All Comments on 'What Lesbians Do Ch. 01'

Very nice, keep up the good work!

…a gift of making the reader feel the erotic heat of discovery, the thrill of the taboo being broken. Keep it up, please!

Very nice, you built the mood, good pace.

There is so much bad writing posted on Literotica and reading your story is like finding a gold nugget after shifting through so much refuse. It was well paced and well written. The set-up to the action is believable without being belabored and the characters and the dialog feel realistic. But it is especially your ablity to clearly and erotically describe the sexual action without falling back on tired cliches that is the real treat here.

Good visual feel, thought I was there watching!

An excellent opening chapter, good characterizations and attention to detail. All this made me think i was a fly on the wall.

Wow, this story was so erotic! thank you for sharing this with us!

I have to admit this is one of my favorite stories. I get extremely wet and it makes me cum every time. This is my go-to story to finish myself off after edging for an hour or so because the orgasms are usually earth shattering and I end up squirting.

Wow that was good!