All Comments on 'What Michael Knows Ch. 04'

I love the story. This one was much better than Chp. 3. This length of story is great too.

But being the a typical man I getting impatient. It's high time Michael gets his wish and as he is the more Dominant if the two sons we know he will most likely own her heart. Thanks

2 chapters too long already.....

It's getting good but could be far more better. Wish to see Michael win his mom heart, soul and body. More successful than his brother Jacob. Another baby with with Michael will be amazing to read. We want Michael to win everything.

Hey where is chapter 5, you can't left this story

on cliffhanger. Amazing turn of events for Miicheal.

I like your way of build up story line, Hot.

Make it amazing in chapter 5

It's being edited. Life's been a little hectic so I haven't had enough time to sit down and give it enough focus. Hoping to submit it for publication tonight or early tomorrow.

You said one a week.. when is Michael bouncing Stephanie off the mattress??