by TabooTales1
I have been waiting for this since the last chapter. It is excellent and I most love the elements of guilt and the sneaking around and keeping secrets. A threesome with both sons would be ok but I hope it doesn't descend into a full orgy with the husband and sister as well. If everybody knows then there's no sneaking around and the whole element of thrill is taken away.
We all know teasing element is hot and
bringing Emma was a good choice but not the
whole chapter 6. I know you have lots of imagination
but if you thinking about 3some with two sons than
story line you building up to now will be ruin. I know
you probably wrote already 3some with the boys
or even with hubby. You wrote an amazing story so far
but you are not writing enough love between Stephanie
and Michael. I would to see love florist with Stephanie
and Michael. After all you did said " What Michael Knows".
Let Michael win Stephanie.
4 Big Star
This is by far the best chapters. I like Micheal
character, he can blackmail his mother instead
he choose to seduce her that's really hot and
realistic. Please write it as love story, not another
quickie. Don't ever go threesome. In reality mother
son love were keep very secretive, hidden behind
close door. Specially "No Third Person" knowledge.
I want to see Stephanie true to Michael. You build
up good characters here, don't ruin going wrong direction.
5 star.
Don't stop this story anytime soon.. finally.. like the others..don't start ruining it with 3 domes..or Lyssa involved.. like with her oldest Jacob, let Michael and Stephanie have a secret trust for a while.. it is "What Michael Knows".. let him bask in his glory while he fucks his mom relentlessly for a while, then eventually have Jacob or Husband find out..
I like chapter 7, 6 was waste of time. You keep on
teasing us what happening between Micheal and
his mother. I'm with the other "No Family Orgy".
Definitely don't ever include sister or father. And please
don't sidetrack flow of the story. I quick through from
chapter 1 to 6, they are your avatar but no big fan
of Jacob. What don't you write more about Micheal and mom.
I LIKE to see Micheal ending up together with his
mom. They are hot together, way you written.
Brah you got a very good story "Don't F**k up".
I like the chemistry between Michael and his mom Stephenie.
Would you please write more chapter just for Michael and his
mom Stephenie
Very nice. It's about time she gave in. If I could have been with my Mom like this, WOW, a total fantasy come true.