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MaxOgdenMaxOgdenover 2 years ago

And then the story collapsed, spectacularly. As soon as 'Uncle Tim' went from minor background character to "Uh oh, I got a bad feeling about this, I see 2 guys 1 girl in the future." I bailed on an otherwise damn good story.

Bringing Tim into the bedroom is like seeing Tom Arnold show up at a party: you hope he gets tired of being ignored and splits without saying much. But then he takes his jacket off and calls for a drink.

Went from 4 stars to half a star.

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