All Comments on 'What Now'

Don't you dare stop here. Nothing makes me more irritated than really good stories that go unfinished. 'Nuf said.

Damnnnn that was good! I agree please let there be more!

Can't wait for a continuation of this story...... HOT!

Great! Look forward fi what’s next.

No worries! I have Chapter 2 on it way! Thanks for the comments! I was super unsure of how my writing would be received and it definitely helps me push forward on the story line!

Oh my god I was not expecting that level of intensity. I cannot wait for the next chapter! Please don’t keep us waiting too long!

THIS IS AMAZING

Now that was good, and you left us hanging

Great job! What an amazing first story. I really liked it :)

Umm, this is great so far and I’m gonna need you to keep writing, please. I love how intense it is, there’s some real potential here.

Great story, very intense and hot and fun to read. Anxious to read chapter two. Thanks for sharing.

This is excellent! You write pretty well. I am eager to read more of your stories!

MORE PLEASE

Great Story

Interesting concept and really hot. Looking forward to reading more. (2 & 3 are already posted). Thanks.

Oh you’ve done a great job for your first story…WOW is it hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter!